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tharleman

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    Artistically, you've got me. I'm trying to decide if the model is real or mannican. Without the model, it would also make a great landscape. You got my attenction, but I'm still struggling with the relationship between the structure and the model. Perhaps, if she were standing???

    Untitled

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    The subject matter is good. It would be nice to either come in closer and more intimate or back out and show more reflection in the water. The subject is almost dead center. But great natural light because it defines the form on all sides.

    Swimming

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    When I first saw this my computer screen cut off the area below the model. I thought it was good. But then I scrolled down and saw the more clear lines in the pool. This photo would be better if the lines a the top were cropped off leaving the model between the middle and upper third.
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