will_beckley

July 5, 2001

I'd like some critique and comments on this shot, my first attempt at

playing with very narrow focus.

Thanks,

Will

July 4, 2001

This is from my 5th roll of film, and my first roll of slide film. I

really liked the sign and its desolate appearence, especially against

the background of the wall and the train and the barren alley. I'd

just like some comments on how to improve. Thanks!

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