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david_lundberg

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    Young lady

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    The picture has potential as a candid portrait, but her face, hands, hair and the background highlights are all blown out. Reprinting the print with a diffusion head and/or lower grade paper, along with some judicious burning in of the background would make this a much more effective picture. You did a nice job of catching her eyes and a sense of uncertainty about her, and the sweater has a nice texture.
  1. Has the feel of a digital camera, a little too much depth of field, blown out highlights and shadows without substance. Good framing and subject matter, but, if you're going to shoot between 10 AM and 2 PM, you need to have perfect control of your film.
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