Moment of life Nr. 1

Moment of life Nr. 1

Thanks for your comments and critique, I will appreciate very much...!

Me encanta este angulo y el uso de luz. Tonalidades de piel preciosas. El lunarcito todos los detalles. Profundidad de campo muy bien concebida. Un trabajo genial. Un abrazo.

Nice tone and posture - coy and beautiful. I just wish the crop was less tight on her head - the light on her hair seems beautiful. Thanks and regards.

Wonderful light and the posture. Fantastic soft effect. All the best. Rgds.

Hola Ricardo! Una composición fantástica con detalles, buena iluminación y juego con la profundidad de campo. Un abrazo, Luis

Me gusta mucho la composicion y como esa expresiva mirada domina todo el retrato. Enhorabuena, un abrazo. Vicente.

Ricardo,

 

She is a very pretty girl. You have focused well on her eye. Her skin tone is quite good -- perhaps a bit red on her nose, cheek and upper chest. The background is nicely out of focus. It is good that her face is against the dark area of the background. It allows her face to be well separated from it. You have cropped quite far into her head, but I think it looks balanced with the bottom of the photograph. Her make-up looks very good.

 

Your subject should have more room in front of her than behind. This allows her to be facing into the picture, not out of it. You want to compositionally balance the left and right sides of the photograph. The compositional "rule" for this suggests that you position the tip of the subject's nose in the vertical center of the photograph.

 

It appears that the main light is coming through the leaves or branches. Her face has patches of light and shade. It is not at all even. Actually, the tip of her nose lit by the sunlight is quite humorous. You want to have even light falling on her face, not mottled.

 

My eyes are drawn to her ear. It is the brightest part of the photograph. It might be better if the front of her face was nicely lit and her ear was in the shade.

 

Be careful of posing her body straight on to the camera. It will appear quite wide. If turned at an angle to the camera if will appear thinner, graceful and feminine.

 

Notice that she has a piece of something white on her lower lip (just inside her mouth).

 

Your name and the date are not part of the photograph. They belong on the mat.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

I apreciate very much your opinions ..!

 

Also: Jorge very nice photo of your granddaughter, she is really very cute and Marx for this very interessting and precise commentary.

 

 

Ricardo

Nice profile, my friend!

Lovely!!! excellent pose, angle, colors and sweet model.

 

Alberto

Una foto muy linda, Ricardo me gusta la luz natural y los contrastes, juventud divino tesoro...

ten un buen dia.

Excellent profile portrait,love the light in this.

I really like the vulnerability and the soft mood in this portrait...

 

Best Regards, Jill