NM-158

There is nothing flat about this. No pun intended.

I would be more worried about the knee. Maybe drop it and twist the hips a bit to slim the waist.

Gorgeous face and expression. She is very confident and attractive.

Best, Leora

Leora,

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment. As always you are very insightful with your comments. It goes back to me not thinking things through during the shoot. Slowly but surely, I am learning to compose before I take the shot. Lesson definitely learned here, and I will keep your comments in my bag of tricks.

Dan

first of all, i don't think the knee has the place there.

second, the model has to wear large enough clothing. in your pic, the string is almost cutting the flesh on left shoulder

most important, when model is sweting, have to take care of make up permanently. the sweting parts are reflecting the flash light (unless this is wanted, and emphasised)

use a telephoto, with f4, to blow away the texture of the wall.