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Hi there!

 

This is a nice shot as is, but to make it an excellent shot it is lacking one thing for me: some human interest. In my mind's eye, a well placed movement blurred or silhoetted sharp figure would really bring this picture to life.

It is still a nice shot, don't get me wrong, but I think you should head back and hang around to get a shot with a person in there!

I hope that's useful!

 

All the best,

 

Rob

 

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Dear friends.

 

Antonio, Saad, Rob. Thanks a lot to stop by this shot.

 

Rob: I'm agreed with your proposal, but in this case I was waiting and old woman to go out of frame to shot this one, I wanted to play and compose with those handrail lines, if I let a person in the shot it shall be a completely diferente shot.

 

My best regards.

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Hi Jose,

 

I just wanted to add something to illustrate my point. Here is a link to a fabulous Andreas Gursky photo where he has used symmetry and repetition.

 

http://markelt.files.wordpress.com/2009/03/gurskyshanghai.jpg

 

However, what makes this a special shot is the two small pieces of humanity.

 

If you are able to reproduce your picture with a person in it, I would love to see it! (Please drop me a line and let me know!)

 

All the best,

 

Rob

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