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Hi Folks,

 

Usually I take actions photos, but everything the publishers ask us to take girls photos

and im trying to get better and no-shy on this subject.

Please critique and let me know where I can do it better.

Nice shot!

Nice try. I would suggest to frime in closer and aviod the unfocused part at the lower edge. I invite you to visit my portfolio. In my nudes folder you can see some topless shots similar to this. Your comments would be appriciated. Congrats.

I dislike the motive behind this photograph. I am presuming the 'model' was unaware she was being photographed and was part of a financial arrangement. I wonder what would have been her reaction to this. The material over her face thankfully gives some anonymity. I had a friend that would take this type of sneaky photograph, I could never do it. That said, it is well taken.

Hi Raymon,

 

Thanks for the comments. I will try some shots tomorrow and i ill post again and let you know.

 

Glen,

 

You're right she doesnt know that i was taking the photo otherwise she will probably punch/kick me.

Thanks for your comment and i will get all the info and try do it better.

 

Thanks

 

F.

Since I've never been to Indonesia, I can not comment about acceptability of this type of shot. It would be perhaps scandelous in the USA. But most US beaches frown on this type of sunbathing.

Also, in US, it is more profitable to sue than it is to punch.

A nice 'action' shot my friend... Going for that all over tan she is. You might have made this a square and cropped out the top a bit.
Cheers, Raymond