Daydreaming ...

Tank for watch, comments are always welcome

An all-around complete and fulfilling photo. Wonderful tonality, wonderful capture of her demeanor and expression, crisp definition, and well suited title.

One of your best! ~~~~~~~~~~L

Beautiful composition with wonderful lighting and marvelous tones.

Very good composition with perfect lighting, pose and expression. Warm regards

Great caption. Nice tonal and the expression you captured. Lovely composition. All the best. Rgds.

Hi Fabrizio,

about the sixt time i come here to comment or rate.

Everytime I come back, so the image is attractive, but when I open, I have doubts how to comment or to rate. So, for me the conclusion is - and it is only my personal point of view, no critique to your work - good, much potential, but could be improved.

I had to think some time wich where for me the weeknesses.

I think

_ The girl is daydreaming, ok, but the lack of tension in her face is accentuated because she get's somehow lost in a space with no special interests.

- The light is rather flat (she is indoor or in the shade).

- The BW conversion doesnt content realy white parts, so it could be enlarged in depth.

Wath I did:

I tought the most important was changing the cropp to make her out of center and getting rid of "lost space". Because it is allready cropped to square, the were not so much possibillities, but you have much more room to experiment with something else.

Then I added contrast to get more "bite" in the picture, because it is allready "soft in expression", and containing not much story. Then I added very softly a sepia and a blue tone to enhance light impression. Feel free to reject my personal opinion, I just wanted to explain why I had problems to be sucked into the pictured

Piet

sorry , I forgot. I also inclined her a little to the back to get her face more out of center, bringing in the same time the book a little more upwards (because there was so few room to manoeuvre.

Piet

Wonderful and lovely image Fabrizio! I understand the Piet version as a way to have a stronger image... very interesting reflections. In any case I like it! Kind regards, Luis

An expressive image with perfect and suitable bw tonality. Best regards.

Very nice and well done...

Very nice expression and composition. Beautiful tones. Well done. Regards, Jean-Marc

Very nice! Best regards, Ilkka

Expressive capture

 

Exceptional, I like the visual impact provided by the expressiveness of the model and the environment. All the best. Vicente.

A beautiful image with fabulous use of light. Good tonalities and composition. Warm regards.

silence