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Marla,

You have done so many things well, I hate to comment on some errors. She is a pretty girl. Her pose and expression is very nice. I really like the lighting. Her plain top works very well. She has nice catch lights. The background is very neutral. She is separated from the background well enough. With window light it would look very odd to have some sort of hair light to separate her hair from the background. The pose and your lighting really shows off her shape well.

There are a few imperfections on her face and arm that you should remove or tone way down. She could use a little less head room.

There is yellow/green on her neck and under her lower lip. I think you have done something to her lips? They just don't come together correctly at the corner (her right). I'm not sure, but it looks like you may have tried to do something to her (Photoshop wise) that didn't work well.

If not making eye contact with the camera (viewer), the eyes should follow the line of the nose. If they are looking to the side, the viewer does not know what she is looking at. This can look rather awkward. If you want her to look out the window (to get good catch lights?) have her turn her head a little more towards the window so she doesn't have to turn her eyes so much.

She has some lint on her blouse. This should be taken out.

Very nice shot,

Mark