hypnotised

available light

Great again!!

Beautiful skin tones ,perfect compositon .

Beautiful work , Excellent light and b&w tones

Excellent work! 6/6

 

Perfect portrait ^^^ Maximum

 

***Ali***

Stefan,

 

She is a beautiful girl with a nice sensual look. You have focused very well on her eyes. Her skin tone and complexion is beautiful. She has very good eye contact with the camera (viewer).

 

Tell her to be careful when using her mascara brush. Some of her eyelashes are not well separated.

 

Your composition has a problem. The image is very bottom heavy. You have squished her head in the upper right corner. Her head needs more room to balance with the rest of the photo.

 

Be careful of the multiple catch light in her right eye. There should be the same number of catch lights in each eye (preferably one in each eye). If you have multiple catch lights, one per eye should be dominant.

 

I am not sure what the white area is? It is located to the right of her shoulder and the bottom of her hair is in front of it. It could be a piece of paper in her lap? It is somewhat distracting as it draws my attention away from her face.

 

Be careful of foreshortening. Watch for anything closer to the camera than the body. Feet, knees, hands, elbows and shoulders will look out of proportion (larger than normal -- foreshortened) to the rest of the body, if they are in front of the body. Her face looks disproportionately small to the rest of her body. Not a whole lot, but it is noticeable to me. It is possibly enhanced by cropping so much into her head and positioning her chin behind her shoulder.

 

I must again complement you on her skin tone. Her face and body looks great!

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

A very beautiful image with nice framing, good use of soft lighting, nice skin tones, and fantastic pose.

very nice!!

I know that I would be very happy if I took this shot.She has beautiful eyes.Well done.

Excellent portrait, Stefan !!. Wonderfully framed, with natural tones. A suggestive look. Best regards.

Beautiful portrait. The lighting, tones, and choice of mono are all outstanding. The "different" composition adds interest. Well done.