Restaurant Hostess I

Les,

You should find out only if you are sure your wife learned "sharing" in school. Otherwise, I would just enjoy pictures of her.

She is a pretty girl. You have focused well on her eyes and her skin tone is very good. A couple of suggestions: More distinct catch lights would have made her eyes stand out more. She needs a little more make-up. Darker mascara, eyeliner, some lipstick or gloss and a little blush. I would also soften the lines under her eyes.

I would center her a little better to balance the left and right sides of the photograph. The compositional "rule" for this suggests to position the tip of the nose in the vertical center of the photograph.

Once you better position her you will lose the pink thing in the upper right corner. I would crop out her left hand and the little bit of left forearm that is showing.

Nice shot,

Mark

Great skintone and sharpness on her eyes. I think Mark gave you the best advice in terms of heartbreaking :)

Best regards Tore