Margaret after surgery to repair broken nose

Any comments are much appreciated, thank you.

Since I am still learning I would certainly keep that in mind. I think the space to the right should be opened so you get a sense of what she is looking toward..the space on the left is wasted. If your intent was to focus only on her I would have then gotten closer to her and blurred the backround a bit. I also find it a bit dark.I hope that helps.

Thanks, but this is how I intend it to look, it is not intended to be a formal or even informal portrait, it is symbolic.

except for Margaret’s mishap, your latest pictures describe a world in equilibrium. So brave of her to allow you to photograph her injury - such disarming lack of vanity. She's clearly a confident young woman who absolutely trusts your artistic impulses.

She shares her injury because to her it is another story to be told, another chapter in the book of Margaret, bumps, bruises, casts, she is proud of it all and why shouldn't she be they are all just signs of a life lived to the fullest. You are a brilliant observer Carlos, I never thought a comment posted on a computer screen would mean much to me when I started sharing on the web, but your comments always brighten my day, good, bad, indifferent, it dose not matter, I trust your eye and your intellect and hope to continue to hear from you.