4 - greece On the Aegean Sea (3)

Is there too much darkness in the upper right corner ?

Should the birds be more on the right side ?

Thanks for your comments.

Hi, i'm an amateur photographer (i studied film but dropped out to study fine arts) but i hope this will make sense.

composition wise, this appears to have that yin-yang element, the dark (upper right) and white (lower left) balance with the birds spanning whre the s-curve should be. Maybe it will look good on a circular frame (this one's square, right?) ? Just a suggestion. But you might be right too, the bird should be more to the right, less dark space :)

By the way, i'm new here and i saw you on PopPhoto so i checked you out

Thanks for your comment. What makes this picture I think is more the color gradient than the composition.

About gradients, I prefer Grande Arche de la Defense (1).