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Critique and suggestions appreciated

L

Hello Linden,

I thought I would add my 5p worth if that's okay. I would like to suggest a couple of things. I think a slight anti-clockwise rotation would help a little as there seems to be a little lean to the right. Also, I don't think that you need to leave the yellow lines saturated - I reckon the whole thing would be cool in B&W. The 'S' curve of the road that you have is excellent, but I think that you need something more to make this shot really work; that is a little bit of humanity. I think a person standing by the road or someone on a bike/ motorbike would really bring this shot to life, especially if they had a little blurred movement. If it is feasible, you could return to this spot and wait for some life to enter the image, and then see what you get! I did the same with this picture:

http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=8975352

I waited and waited until someone walked into it.

There is real potential in this location, so I really hope you return!

Anyway, I hope that is useful. I certainly mean it all to be constructive.

Have a good one,

Rob