Washington Park Lake House

My first roll of slide film and print of one frame. And, my first

request for critique. August Evening Performance, (Albany, NY.)

Nice reflection. Too much sky.

Try putting the horizon line right in the middle on this kind of shot.. The dark shadows get too much attention and would look better in lower angle light

Nice reflections but uninteresting subject from this distance.

The building reminds me a steam boat (i'm not sure if it is the name of those boats...) I should crop a bit the upper part of the sky.

I don't think the problem is the quantity of sky, but the emptiness of it. Wait for a day with some clouds & try it again, if you can. Its amazing what a few clouds can do.