PROUD

San Francisco has many beautiful attractions. As you can see beauty

comes in many forms in the town where you always leave part of your

heart behind. Thank you for looking. Rates and comments

appreciated.

Good exposure, you even separated her hair from the darkness. Indeed a pretty lady - yet she is not happy. The look on her face I read as concern, not with you taking her picture but something to your left. Since she is looking to picture left, it is unfortunate that you did not compose this with the larger space on that left side rather than centering the eyes. The large dark space on the right gives a sense of unbalance to the composition. You even clipped her ear.

Looking even closer I see that she does something that most women cannot get away with - only professional makeup artists can. She has overpainted her lips to make a narrow part look wider, but used a transparent lipstick so her subterfuge is immediately apparent. I understand that you as photographer could not control that but you could retouch it in respect to her keeping such things secret. The retouching could also brighten her eyes just a touch.

Regards,

Jerry