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No glitz, no glamour. Natural smile and natural beauty. A very nice portrait. Great work Tore.

Have a great day.

James

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Beautiful model with very good lighting. Very sharp eyes with excellent catch-lights. Natural smile and superb skin tones.

 

I would prefer the background a little more out of focus so that the model stands out.........Best regards.

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Exquisite model, Tore...you captured her beauty with elegance. Well done, my friend. Regards, Lawrence.
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Thank you for your comments,

The light is natural light in the shade at midday and a narrow softbox with a flash that is a little higher than general light to fill in with the light in the face.

 

Best regards Tore

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Tore,

 

Beautiful girl with lovely blue eyes -- Sharp focus on eyes -- Very well done make-up (especially well applied mascara). You have separated your subject very well from the background. She has a very pleasant expression. Her eye contact with the camera (viewers) is very good. I love the specular highlights on her lips.

 

You could have moved in a little closer to her. There is too much head room and you could crop some off the bottom (at least up to the bottom of her hair). You have a bit too much room in front of her. You should position the tip of her nose in the vertical center of the photograph.

 

You have her leaning her head back too much. There is an odd tilt to it. The background is not bad, but you would have drawn less attention to it if it was more out of focus. Your lighting is a little flat. She does not much depth to her. More use of shadows would have helped that problem.

 

Her complexion looks nice and smooth, but perhaps a bit too smooth. It doesn't look quite real. It usually is not a good idea to remove too many pores. You want to make sure it still looks like skin. There are a couple of white specks on her jacket that should be removed.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

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For me an excellent work. Skin smoothening is perfect for my taste. Light, colours, model, pose and composition are superb.
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You have so many great pictures in your collection that it is hard to pick the one that I particularly like. I think that this one is splendid and remarkable. I like the contrast of the soft beautiful face with the harsh background. Light, facial expression and posing are superb.

I agree with Mark that she could use a bit less headroom.

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