Formal Portrait

Comments or Critisms gratefully recieved . Thank you .

Overall a good portrait...I really like her confident expression and quartering pose...maybe just a bit more open in her shoulders though. The lighting is nice as is her hair and make up. Just a few minor nits....I would have shot from a slightly higher angle...this would de-emphasize her arms and shoulders and draw more attention to her lovely face and eyes. Also I understand your efforts with the vignetting, but for me the change in tones is a bit abrupt on her lower arms...maybe experimenting with some form of blurring instead...anyway hope you don't mind my comments...again overall a nice effort...lovely young lady. Regards.

Thanks for taking the time to make such an indepth critism .Comments on my shots are rare and are treasured !

I agree with you and I will let her read what you have written , it may encourage her ! I have to persuade her to pose as she doesn't enjoy it .

Thanks again , Bill

I think this is a great shoot, nice light and a lovely looking model.

 

Best regards Tore

Thanks Tore . Bill

I'm sorry I missed this one Bill, she looks so lovely!

Thanks Gail . Don't worry , you are not the only one to miss images , I'm guilty on that front and now and again I will go through P.F.'s to see what I've missed . Bill

Good balance in the Lightning in this one, a great portrait.

Best regards Tore