Cassie

I printed this image recently and really like it. There is something really

nice about a pretty model against a textured wall.

Mark,

 

There is something really nice about any girl (not just a pretty model) against a textured wall. It is a good place to photograph them, too!

 

Cassie is a very pretty girl. Your composition is quite good. I think your major problem is that your focus is not very sharp on her eyes and her lighting is not good. She has shadows across her eyes. You can hardly see the whites of her eyes let alone have catch lights in them. You need to light her face better.

 

From her neck down is very good. Her skin tone is good and her white blouse has excellent detail.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

Interesting creative image.

Pretty girl and nice compositon. The problem is that the focusing is not on her eyes and her face is not lightened properly. I suggest a reflector to bounce some light on the face and eye. Regards.

Beautiful portrait with her nice expression. Only thing that is not jelling with the mood is the graininess in her face. I would prefer to use a mask to make the skin soft.

 

Regards.