wet wet wet...

some comments?

Johnny, You have all the photo craftsmanship nailed. The lighting and exposure are good, the depth of field works, your horizon is horizontal, the pose is provocative and the wet garment enticingly revealing. But ..... her expression is pained (maybe squinting in the sun?) When we see a pretty partly clad girl cavorting in the sun, we want to believe she is so happy to be with us that she is giggling and girly. Damn! One more thing to master, but I'm sure you will.

 

Regards,

 

Jerry

Johnny, for what it's worth, I have to agree with Jerry 100% on this one. I even like the way her face is a touch out of focus. But she does look like she's straining.

 

And Jerry, kudos to you for putting it all so eloquently.

 

Best,

 

Michael

As gorgeous as she is, the out-of-focus (?motion blurred?) face is a fatal flaw. It is out of focus in such a way that it does not seem intentionally done for artistic effect, but rather appears to be a problem of technique.

Thanks friends

 

I give you all right in all the criticsme

 

the out of focus whas my fovl (i use a wrong pol filtre..a liniært one !!! on a digital cam, not good !!!!)

we have a new sessions 17-6 and thats whas must better, sharp picx and more smile..:O)

 

many thanks

 

johnny