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In my opinion your composition could be improved, the complex machinery suggests a square format but the pipe on the left justifies a wider format. Secondly, you DOF is too large, a blurred background could increase the impact of the geometry of the machine. Nevertheless your black and white is very good and the photograph interesting. Best regards. J.

Composition here is all ok plus the light, thank you for sharing it and wishing you all of the best.