Apurva Madia 0 Posted June 5, 2009 Father having a shave on his way to work as seen by the lunch box sitting on the pavement, son looking at the whole process with interest and waiting for it to be over. The barber meanwhile doing his job with a detachment, looking in the distance. View large please, thanks for your time! Link to comment
andrea-de-bonis 6 Posted June 5, 2009 ciao, apurvia. I rated 5 for aesthetic becouse, at my eyes, the photo seems a little bit flat, but not for the contrast, maybe for the tunes and the light. you had a great light there, a full light coming from the left, but the shadows are pale. the tree, for istance. look at it. why there are no shadows? i see the shadow on the ground, but only there. maybe you used shadow/highlight? also the faces.... the sitting man seems more dark of the other one, so, i think that working on the elements of the background, bricks, tree, and the metallic thing (i dont know the name in english), the subject will be more visible. ciao, thanks Link to comment
morophaenixmau 19 Posted June 12, 2009 My dear friend Andrea de Bonis is a bit too much severe! 6/6!...Ciaoamu! Link to comment
Apurva Madia 0 Posted June 12, 2009 Maurozio, to set the record streight, Andreas gave that criticism on my specific request! Any way, thanks for your interest in this picture and for taking the time! Regards. Link to comment
chens 0 Posted June 15, 2009 interesting interaction betwwen the three persons. and i like the composition too. excellent street snap. regards. Link to comment
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