50 Years of Service

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imo when your intent is to record the nuances of human expression(facial or otherwise), the face needs to be more visible. regards.

if my intent was as you say i would most definitely have

Then my bird brain pleads guilty of not getting anywhere near your POV.;-P

try critiquing it from your own point-of-view based on what evidence you have

Sorry for took so long to reply.

I see two different levels on this image; the representation of the artistry of act of taking a photo, and this is recursive, as you appear in the image creating it. The other aspect taht seems very clear to me is the proximity to a stripe of a BD album because of the way the number 5 placard gives continuity to your head/mouth and states 'fidelity to'.

Anyway, on this aspects the photo works extremely well while on the overall it lack something clarity to make it easier others to see.

As your personal project I admire it.

Your friend,

Mário

Thank you, Mario.