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Massimiliano,

Pretty girl - Nice "Eyes of Laura Mars" shot - Sharp focus - Good lighting - Very good skin tones - You have made good use of the shadows and contrast to add interest and a bit of mystery to your image - The pose of her left hand is quite feminine looking, but the fist of her right hand is a very masculine pose. The rim light works very well to separate her from the background.

Her "sexual" expression seems a bit forced to me. It really isn't in good form to show part of her bra and bra strap. It shows a lack of refinement.

She should have more room in front of her than behind. You have her very off balance. She must be moved way back to compositionally balance the image as far as left and right goes. A good "rule" of thumb is to position the tip of her nose in the vertical center of the photograph. This will usually compositionally balance the photograph, nicely.

The catch lights in her eyes seem to be just touching the whites of her eyes. They should be wholly within the iris of the eye.

Your logo and web address is not part of the photograph. They belong on the mat. They distract the viewer's eyes from the girl.

Nice shot,

Mark