*** (*6366)

*** (*6366)

The tones are nice, of both skin and grass, but there's too much grass in view. There's so much contrast in the texture it draws the eye from the subject without being fully successful as a framing device. The dark splotches in the background in the upper left and right also draw the eye a bit, competing for attention. Lovely model and I like how she's lit, there's just too much competition for the eye.