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Another view ..

Hi John

 

Well done, nice shoot, nice sexy exhibition scene on the roof.

 

Congratulations.

 

Friendly.

 

Jean-Jacques

 

 

 

 

Beautiful! I particularly like the "S" curve of her body and the sunglasses.

 

Jim Phelps

Hi John,

 

Very nice, as always!

 

Best,

 

Michael

Hmm... I guess I'm the only one seeing a lot of off notes.

 

To me the light / quality of the exposure is way less than your other picturers. (Those in cloudy / shade / indoor lighting). I understand that's pretty unavoidable in the harsh afternoon light but still I can't not say this.

 

Plus I wonder if the composition wouldn't be better if your viewpoint was more to the left and below. (Or would that place you above a long drop?)

 

Anyway, respect to the model because the shoot was obviously exposed to third parties, the weather (albeit nice) and a distinct possibility of vertigo next to the inevitable chasm.

 

Kind regards, Matthijs.

Thanks Mathijs, undoubtedly you are right. The lighting conditions were much too harsh and not to my liking at all .. howevver, I am posting from a laptop without the ability to make any adjustments. I will have to see what this looks like on a computer when I get back home. Thanks for passing by.

Excellent. I love your style!!!

 

Regards.

 

Alberto

I like the location, the model is obviously very lovely...I just don't know though, John....seems a bit awkward to me.

Very nice work in a perfect sunny day , Her skin-tone is marvelous , I'm sure all the people working in the surrounding buildings will remember this day as "the most interesting day I had ever had in the office" :)

Thank you all, and Tammy also for the critique. it is meant to be something of a carricature/cartoon figure, but I more than understand if it displeases. Thanks again yu Tammy. I will have to look at all these when I get home, they often look somewhat different on a laptop.

 

I will add that there are many of my own works I don't like (a phrase since echoed by others), but I will admit that I like this one. I think I'll put it on the cover of my next book .. it's crazy, it's fun and it doesn't take life very seriously . :-)

Strange but pleasant pose!...Ciaomau!

Sunshine, Blue Skies, a Rooftop and a Lovely Lady... What more could one ask for... Well Made Indeed!

Very (Helmut) Newtonesque ! Well done !

Homage to Helmut! That's that first thing I thot! Love it John!