Landrum Kelly 65 Posted May 20, 2009 This is lovely, Doug. Having her hands apparently reach up into the blossoms makes this into a stronger composition, I think. I would probably shop out the panty lines, but even as is it is very nice. --Lannie Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted May 20, 2009 what panty lines? I don't see any panty lines. I shopped out a panty pinch on her waist. Link to comment
Landrum Kelly 65 Posted May 21, 2009 Actually, Doug, I think that you said that it was a swimsuit bottom. I can see a trace of a dark band--not that it is really very obvious. --Lannie Link to comment
bronx 0 Posted May 21, 2009 I really like the composition. The path and woods adds a lot to this photo without being a distraction, and the pose is nicely pulled off without looking to fake. Well done. Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted May 21, 2009 Lannie, ok, I see it too, but it is really faint, isn't it? I'll give it a touch up if I ever print it but I doubt I'll update it here. What bothers me more is the near straight line of her left side, from her left elbow to the hem of her dress. I would like to have seen more curvature there. Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted May 21, 2009 David, I think I'll post the path as it was before we started using it. It's not a bad picture in and of itself. Thanks. Link to comment
lightwait 0 Posted March 6, 2010 "I would like to have seen more curvature there." Then move to the right. Link to comment
dougityb 0 Posted March 11, 2010 seems easy enough in hindsight. I guess I could've asked her to turn counter clockwise, too. Link to comment
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