first warm days

just a walk on the beach with one very shy model

Beautiful light, tones and picture.

Beautiful dress and model, and location to. i really like the picture but i want it to be just a little bit brighter so it gets a bit warmer :)

 

but great job

 

regards /Sandra

Beautiful portrait and location. Very nice side lighting and the resulting shadowing. Very complementary camera position (about mid-waist) and timing to capture some water of the receding wave at her feet.

I like! Very nice photograph I like how she comes out of the ocean looks like some Greek goddess emerging from the water very creative

I maybe would try to fix those tan lines though

Frederick,

 

Beautiful girl with a lovely figure - Very sharp focus - Great skin tones on her face - I love the location, the pose of her hands and her beautiful gown - She is nicely separated from the background - The white water, especially behind her, works very well with the color of her gown - The dark blue of the sky sets her off nicely - Her eyeshadow works well with the blue of the sky

 

It looks like you have a little burn problem around her - I wish you had light in her eyes - I don't like the way the light is hitting the side of her nose, her upper lip, her chin and her chest (these little pops of light attract my attention) - I would like to see her turned a bit (right hip back) and walking more from the side into the picture instead of towards the camera - This would make her hips appear thinner (seen more at an angle) and more graceful - I'm not sure her eye contact with the camera (viewer) is very effective at this distance (I don't feel a real connection with her), therefore I would like to see her looking down or somewhere in front of her as she walked at an angle to the camera.

 

As was already mentioned, the tan line needs to be removed.

 

A beautiful setting with a beautiful girl.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark