Pam

I've been pondering if I should request critiques on this image since I

made it. I happen to like it even though I know there is something a little

disturbing about where I cut off her left arm. I like her expression and the

way her breasts fall on her rib cage. Lighting is single flash bounced off

the ceiling.

Lovely breasts indeed. The slight asymmetry of the eyes is captivating too. These two features grabbed my eye and I did not immediately notice the awkward crop. After you mentioned it and I looked back, I saw it but I thought it matches the overall feeling of the shot. The background is mostly straight vertical and horizontal lines, which emphasizes the curves of the subject even more.

It got my attention. To be honest I don't like the akwardness of the pose but I do think the model has a charm that is shown in her smile.

Thank you both for the comments. I like working with Pam and I think it shows in the images.As for the crop, there is more to her left but she is leaning on an old school desk and it looked worse then this.

She is wonderful...I love her expression...I would shop out the dark under her eye on the right side though :)

Thank you Ray for the kind comment. I agree that Pam is terrific and I will consider your suggestion.