fabrizio_r 0 Posted May 8, 2009 Very good lighhtness and tones, well done Thomas, ciao Fabrizio Link to comment
mrraz 0 Posted May 9, 2009 This is a very dynamic figure study. The visual flow created by the model's pose and your lighting seems to replicate the tension of a drawn bow looking down range. Were this my shot, I might have done a couple of things differently. I would have first softened the rather quick transition of light to dark on the background. Her right knee loses some separation from the BG. Secondly, I would have used a somewhat tighter crop at the top by reducing the space from the top frame edge to her left arm by about 50%. I feel this would balance the tight feel created the model's close proximity to the bottom of the frame. Even though our choices might be different, there is no faulting your excellent presentation. This is beautiful work! Link to comment
thomas_doering 0 Posted May 9, 2009 Thanks for your detailed comment and the helpful suggestions. It's at least worth trying the changes you described. Kind regards,Thomas Link to comment
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