Demise of Darkness

I'm trying to see things more abstractly... harder than I thought! What do

you think of this image?

 

I also have an inverse of this in my portfolio, which is the original. Which

do you like better?

 

As always, constructive comments, positive and negative, are welcome

and appreciated. Thank you!!

 

--Ryan

I preffer this more because it's more darker and depressing, fits well in abstract genre. Based on your crit request i would say, that if you would like it to be more abstract you should get more closer to it. Now it kind of brakes apart in the sides of the photo because there is too much lines to follow and they runs out from the image. Not bad everytime, sometimes a little mayhem is only a good but in this one i would suggest to make it a little simplier. Just my opinion. Cheers.

Tero,

 

Thanks for your input. I will keep that in mind for the future. Thank you for looking.

 

--Ryan

An interesting idea and way you did this,regards Radu.