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Boje,

Yes she is... She is a pretty girl with lovely hair and delicate skin. Sharp focus on her eyes - Very good composition - Her feet are very well posed (feminine and graceful) - Nice lighting - Her white outfit works well with her light blond hair - It is hard to beat a tastefully done shot where you can see up a girl's skirt (personal observation).

Her red fingernail polish draw may attention away from her face - You are showing the flat side of her right hand (notice how you posed her feet and left hand, if you show her right hand from its edge it will be slimming, feminine and graceful) - Notice her lower back (this girl is not slim - you have to be very careful not to allow any bulges to show) - You have turned her slightly (this is good - it helps give her a more slimming look), but her shoulders still look quite broad (she needs to be turned even more) - Her hair is either in her eyes or is too close to her eyes (it needs to be brushed away from her eyes) - You are crowding her on the edges of your picture (especially her skirt - move back a little - The colors, various geometric shapes and sharpness of your background is very distracting - For me her top is awfully bedroom looking for the location - Her hands, legs and feet are all lighter than her face (it isn't too bad, but it does draw my attention away from her face).

Nice shot of a pretty girl,

Mark

This is very good. Well done. It would be nice to see more of her. Just a great job.

Michael Marinier

Thanks Mark for you very fine comments

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