Outside the station

taken from a taxi driving past

Fascinating composition. The diagonal formed by the three figures, each in a different stage of awareness - one transfixed, the middle blurred from spinning his head, the third seemingly unaware of whatever has attracted the other two - is almost theatrical. The cut-off point of the subjects' hands is a bit awkward. I wonder whether cropping a bit higher from the bottom and a bit lower from the top would strengthen the composition without losing the essence of this photo?

No real estate remaining top or bottom, left and right are of no value

I like it a lot, but was unaware why, then I read Lex great insight into the composition and I became aware of the "TRIOLOGY OF AWARENESS" that makes the image great. Take care. Warm regards.

Your visits to my portfolio are a real pleasure. Your staunch support is... i could use so many words for my feelings but they all seem crass... i guess you know what i mean... i've been wanting to rate max for some of your recent portraits but have been unable to owing to the rules... soonest i get the opportunity i want to revise some of them... regards, rajat