Water Play

What would you do to make this pop?

Jody, I feel, personally,that less diffusion would make for an improvement in the whole series. Just my take on your work if you are interested. I like to see the water and skin as reality, and the fantasy is in the posing part, --as you are doing-- imaginative from what I can see. Soft focus sometimes works well, but maybe it is just a little overdone in this case. I wish you well. Bathing in the tub is an erotic thing and a good setting, I will say that was a good idea, indeed. gs

Thnx very much Gerry. I appreciate your thoughts and perspective!

I like everything about this image Jody. I think I would try it in B&W to see how it changes the feel.

 

Michael

I'm enjoying the whole series you're doing with this lady.I personally think the diffusion you're using with most of these photos is fitting with what you're trying to portray.All these photos are in the romantic vein and,as so are being presented as a fantasy.I understand just what your doing.

 

Now,for the lady.It's nice to see someone showing that you don't have to be in your 20's to be sexy and sensual.Most people shooting these type of photos typically shoot young girls just out of their teens to mid 20's.Your model is showing a comfort and maturity in front of the camera that comes with living.Very sexy.