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Neil,

Nicely sharp - her mascara is well put on - I personally do not care for this tight of a shot on this girl (perhaps it would work better for me if it was done with a more high-key approach) - her expression is also not to my liking - being this close emphasizes the largeness of her lower lip (it looks out of proportion to the upper) - She has no catch lights in her eyes (without catch lights she looks dead – catch light = life in the subject) - you are also bisecting her iris with a shadow (this adds to her blank eyes) - You skin tone is not too bad, but you go from showing a lot of texture in the shadow area to none in the highlights.

Mark