Anna

Kris,

Nice lighting - Good catch lights - Pleasant expression

There is too much space at top and bottom - Her left knee is too close to the side of the frame - You must lighten the picture (notice the whites of her eyes are not white) - Have her look to her left a little so that not so much of the whites of her eyes are showing - Make-up (very little), pose (straight on), hand positioning (flat of hand showing and tightly gripping each other) are all very masculine (done because of sexual orientation I will assume) - She needs to be separated from the background (hair light, backlight, background light or a combination is needed) - With horizontal stripes it is good that she is so thin, but I still keep looking down to her stripes (away from her face) - Be careful to keep her necklace centered,

Good shot,

Mark