naughty schoolgirls

some comments ?

Johnny,

 

Pretty girl - love her hair - Nice shape - Good skin tone - Very good composition - Nicely sharp focus - great specular highlights on her shoes - You have shown off her lovely legs and bottom very well (to bad about the shadow are on her right leg - almost looks like she has a little cellulite, but I'm sure it is just the shadow - also, the line of her right leg is not very pleasing - makes that leg look a little bowlegged).

 

Her left hand looks a bit awkward on her leg as does the right (if you would show the edge of the fingers it would be more slimming, feminine and graceful - you have cut into both of her irises (with a split profile - tip of nose touching the far cheek which, of course, is a posing error - it is common for the eye to be cut with the bridge of the nose) - with the eyes being cut you could have no catch light in her eyes to give her life - a back or hair light would have separated her more from the background.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

Mark says it all, plus the unevenness of the lighting of the top and the bottom. the top is well-lit but the bottom is poorly so.