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very well seen and captured. this is moody, tactile and brilliant. there are all sorts of scenarios to be suggested by this, but i'll confine my remarks to say "wow". nice.
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A mixture between still-life and portrait with a fantastic result. And what an expression given by the girl.

Warm regards,

--MAA

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Facundo,

 

This being in the portrait category, I will critique it as a portrait of the girl.

 

Pretty girl - Very nice tones, including skin tones - balanced well - good pose (left hand could be turned a little so that you are showing more of the edge of the hand - more feminine and slimming to her hand) - you do have some leading lines pointing towards the girl (this is good) - good sharpness. No catch lights in her eyes. Her ear is sticking out of her hair.

 

You do have some problems with this a photograph of the girl: You have a split portrait (the girl and the statue - they are the same size, but the statue is "looking" toward the girl - this gives her more importance (dominance) even with the statue at a higher level in the picture, but she is looking out of the picture, not into it. This makes for a very confusing relationship between the two major subjects in the picture. When you have two subjects within a picture you should have one dominant over the other, but you should also show a relationship between the two subjects. What is the reason you have the two subjects within your photograph? I do not see a relationship here. They are both "looking" in the same direction, but you don't show what, if anything, they are looking at.

 

Nice shot,

 

Mark

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