Pegorer Basco

Emanuele,

Beautiful girl (if she isn't French she should be – or at least French Canadian) - great composition and hand placement - love her expression - nice catch lights - make-up OK>but right side is not the same as the left side?

It is not sharp (your focus is off a bit) - too light (you can hardly see her nose and her chin) part of the problem is the extreme flat lighting - your main light is your fill - I'm not sure I like her arms coming out of nowhere (they could be someone else’s arms), but with this tight a shot here is not much you can do about it - I would have her body turned at bit so you are not shooting flat against her chest (I think her shoulder line looks a bit awkward - shooting this close with her hands close to her face and her left hand in front will make them look disportionately large compared to her face (same with her forearms) - hands and arms also washed out - you may want to burn the bottom just a little to hold the viewer's eyes in the picture (once you get your lighting correct).

Good shot,

Mark

thanks...i've tried to d an high key shoot....

i know that the lighting is not correct...but i love this shoot and so i post it

the girls is a beautifull italian girl :-)

thanks

Ciao Emanuele, bellissimo ritratto high key, splendida l'espressione della ragazza (bellissima), avrei solo aumentato leggermente la saturazione di occhi e bocca, ma giusto un punto in più. Ottimo lavoro!

Fabrizio