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What do you think about this composition? -- I actually like it the least

of the three pictures with the same pose (but can't decide whether I like

the first or the last the most; this is the middle one)

I like the composition but the tonal balance is rather dark. Arranging the model across the diagonal of the picture would be worth trying.

Re composition: check out this one out, Ken -- do you like the diagonal composition better?

Re the tonal range: I thought there wasn't enough separation between the model and the background, but didn't think the model herself was too dark. Is that what you meant by the tonal balance is rather dark? -- thanks for clarification! :)

I like the diagonal composition which works very well. On my monitor the image is still rather dark ( there is no detail in the model's hair) ,but this may be a matter of taste .

 

regads

ken

I think it a very fine composition. I used to paint nudes and loved making compositions like this. I have to agree wtht he other though, needs a little more pop in the exposure.