Sam - VI

C&C welcome. Cheers, Don

Don,

 

Great front lighting - love the light falling on her cheek and eye - no make-up OK because she could have just gotten out of the bath - very nice expression - a little light problem on the lower right of the picture.

 

I like everything about this picture (even the color cast to her face from the reflection of whatever is around her head and shoulders- perhaps a towel - it wouldn't hurt to fix it a bit, though) except the cropping: the top and bottom are fine - you must either do some serious cropping on the right or extend the white (lucky for you it would be easy to do) on the left - either way the tip of her nose MUST be closer to the center of the picture (she must have more room in front of her than behind) - let her look into the picture, not out of it.

 

Good shot,

 

Mark

This is a nice portrait...I really like profiles. Nicely lit, the rim highlights really shape her face and make her profile stand out. Nicely captured.