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Truly wonderful. Maybe the cross should be USMed/contrasted a little further and the fingers should not be cropped, but in any case, I find this really classic and good. This will age well eternally.
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Per,

 

The nicely done: Beautiful girl with perfect make-up for the mood of this image (lipstick color is perfect) - very nice composition, skin tone - great background color and background lighting - good catch lights - good expression and placement of head and eyes - good to have her cross lit - nice lighting, but if you wanted a more classical Rembrandt style of lighting you should have moved your main light to your left and up a bit.

 

Some things I would have changed: the white blouse (clothing) under her wrap is showing and is distracting, as is a white dot under her left elbow (clothing?) - her left hand is too bright (burn it in!) - her left hand is facing the camera (not feminine): turn it so that the edge of her hand (slimming and feminine) is facing the camera - don't cut off half of her right hand and tone it down at bit - brightness should become less as you move away from her face, not increase - especially as you near the edge of the picture.

 

Nice Shot!

 

Mark

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