Published: Wednesday 10th of July 2002 07:00:24 PM
Interesting in terms of form, shape and texture. I like the hair all over the place, and the shape of the body: very unusual. the wrinkles on the subject's left shoulder (on the picture's right) I feel would complete the photograph's strong graphic appeal if they were eliminated, or covered up with hair, as the case may be.
8 / 8 Good, but imo not as good as some of your other pictures... The few things I have a problem with are: 1) the skin at the shoulder level, right side, 2) the light. I would find this a lot more interesting with a more mysterious lighting, involving more contrast, more shadoes. Side lighting on 2 or on 3 of the 4 sides for example. The hair could also be arranged, maybe, in a more "aesthetical mess" if that makes any sense... Still a good concept, but could be better, I think, at the execution level... Regards.
Good composition and light.