Devotion - 2

Thank you!

Nice to see you visit again! Regards to sunny Florida ( I guess..), El

Great moment and composition.7/7anon.

Very beautiful.regards

Lovely portrait of this Violinist. Your point of view certainly adds dynamics to the shot...I can almost hear her playing....Regards

 

Excellent portrait EL ^^^ Tanx for sharing & Warm regards (Sorry I can't input 7/7)

 

***Ali***

Awesome, El. Regards, Lawrence.

I like the perspective. S

Excellent tones, sharpness & perspective.

Amazing capture of her inner soul and deep feelings! Very well done, tbo. Best regards, Linh Dinh

I like this one better between the two, though both are very good. This has motion in it. compliments -koushik

both pictures are fabulous, especially the composition. regards.

Composición más atrevida y dinámica, que la anterior. 7/7 a. Saludos

Great composition!

both of them are very good...congrats

Both "devotion" portraits are wonderfull, and really have to be seen together, as they are showing two very different moods and dynamics as two movements in a same musical composition.

 

Perhaps ( but just a very personal idea, and not sure it would work ), as you already cropped the hand on top and part of the head on the left, you could crop even more the left part in order to completely remove the background between the shoulder and the head. ( it may reinforce the difference between the two shots, but may not be as intersting on this single photo ).

 

Anyway, these are beautifull portraits as they are.

Very nice shot with dynamism, and very good black and white, nice lighting perhaps a little more of left hand fingers.... :-) regards

grande bn, el, e grande inquadratura. tra l'altro il taglio delle dita, unito al taglio dell'estremità del violino, sembrano dare il senso del movimento dello strumento. nn tutti sanno andare contro le regoline....

La magia de la musica, casi puede oirse.

Abrazo y eso.

El. De nuevo en esta fantastica casa, donde se disfruta con trabajos tan excelentes como el que hoy nos muestras, con una buenisima composicion, y gran dominio de las luces altas y bajas. Un abrazo, Joaquin. Max.

Just marvelous. Regards! - Lester

Wonderful perspective and tones. regards.

excellent focus and tones. a very dynamic portrait.

A big thank you very much to all of you for your positive response to version 2 of my ‘candid stage portrait’ proposal. I appreciate that you took the time to evaluate. Thank you very much indeed. With best regards, El

 

To Laurent- Paul Robert:………………………..Thank you very much for your improvement proposal which I read with much interest. Indeed, there are some alternative possibilities worthwhile to try and surely I will make use of your suggestions. Thanks again for your very well considered ‘second opinion’. Best regards, El

 

 

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