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ilkka_kallio

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Very fine, but I might like to see a little more of the face. Otherwise an excellent concept and exposure.
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Ilkka,I like this series, interesting figure, dress, color palette and composition, my only nits are her face, which are very dark, needs a bit more light and less centered, imo. I like it and worked a bit to show you what I think, please let me know what you think?

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Hello and thanks for visiting with comments. The reason why I let the face stay at shadow is based on the mythical Finno-Ugric element of this figure, she is not a person and that´s why the face is not an essential part of this shot. I rather use the golden triangle composition at the center because there is not enough space at the left side of the photo, imo. With best wishes, Ilkka
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I think a lower angle would have worked better. My biggest concern is that the water has no watery texture. I would have throw a stone into the water first, to get water texture. It's a very interesting subject. If the subject is a sculpture, then the sculptor gets all of the credit.
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Dear friend Ilkka!!

 

Very nice style here,and good compose!!

 

Take care...Regards(Bobby).

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a creative shoot well done, but it looks a bit cold for the model :)

 

Best regards Tore

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