Alanna II

Thanks in advance for comments.

Great sensual pose...

Excellent composition and use of light, beautiful model !!!

 

Nice shoot, beautiful model, and perfect lignting, a nice glamour and sensual moment.

 

Congratulations

 

Best regards.

 

Jean-Jacques.

 

Extraordinary use of lightning, depth and framing are a class in itself, and her body language simply overwhelming. Congratulations to both of you.

Excellent!!

 

Jim Phelps

Beautiful lighting , pose , curves , and model. Good Job.

Beautiful lighting and composition.

I used the "paper over the monitor" crop tool, and I thought the balance was better with about 1/2 of the area above her head cropped off. The shadow on her face seems harsh and unnatural. Beautiful tones, lighting and composition. You caught a wonderful expression from her.

There should be less contrast and shadows on the model.

Classic pose.

 

Skin tones look good, but perhaps some subtle lighting alterations would make the shot slightly better. There's too much shadow on the model in my humble opinion.

Good pose, lighting, model.

Nice girl!