a calm dream in b&w

 

what do you think about this composition? I'm somehow happy with it, but can't figure out what to do to improve this shot? maybe a tighter crop or wider angle would work well?

 

thanks for your help, patrick

Indeed you should be happy Patrick. It is a nice shot. The only comment I can think is the sky is a bit uninteresting. Perhaps with some burning, it could gain some more detail. It would appear that there a few low clouds there. But this only a minor point.

thanks miguel, that's a very good point indeed, I haven't thought about that yet. now that you say, I really should start using dodge&burn more often :)

 

best wishes,

patrick