modeling/fashion work Untitled

Welcome comments and suggestions, thank you.

interesting! i like the mood, subjects, and lighting. i love how the legs on the left are positioned and trail out of the photo, as well as the interesting position of her fingers. i would suggest cropping more on the right so as to center the window and using a zoom above 24 mm on a digital SLR to avoid the distortion (visible in the bottom of the window pane). hope this was helpful!