dallalb 0 Posted January 31, 2009 Please click on the image to view it larger. This wavy field half covered with show reminded me the sea... An ocean in the countryside.Thank you if you would spend a little time to watch this photo and leave me a sincere comment or a critique. Link to comment
glaucodattini 0 Posted January 31, 2009 Ottima composizione. Hai la capacità di estrarre dalla natura dei patterns e delle textures molto attraenti! Un saluto. Glauco. (7/7 a.) Link to comment
vicenteconcha 8 Posted February 1, 2009 Minimalism and beauty come together in this scene, excellent photographic force. Congratulations. Best wishes. Vicente. Link to comment
PeterKrenek 26 Posted February 2, 2009 Well observed, Alberto. The strong diagonals and waves work well, cannot find anything substantial to improve, perhaps consider cloning the bush in the right upper corner ? It is nice to see someone who is still shooting 35 mm slides (like me)... Best regards. Peter Link to comment
dallalb 0 Posted February 3, 2009 Thank you Peter, you are a good observer too! I was undecided to clone or not the small bush in the upper right corner of the image, but at least I thought that it was a small clue to reveal that this perhaps abstract composition was the countryside. Link to comment
PeterKrenek 26 Posted February 5, 2009 Probably you are right about the bush, Alberto. It is neither obtrusive nor distractive, so it is OK to keep it. Link to comment
barbaracorvino 0 Posted March 13, 2010 Mi piace molto questo astratto naturale che unisce linee rette ed ondulate. Taglierei una strisciolina in alto per rendere l'immagine piu' pulita e dare la sensazione che i campi proseguano all'infinito... Ciao. Barbara Link to comment
dallalb 0 Posted March 14, 2010 Grazie Barbara per il tuo gentile ed onesto commento.Anch'io sono rimasto a lungo perplesso riguardo a quella "strisciolina" in alto... Poi ho deciso di lasciarla, in modo che fosse un piccolo indizio di realtà, tale da infrangere la surrealtà dello scatto e riportare lo spettatore nel vero contesto della foto, la campagna padana. Comunque, ottima osservazione e suggerimento.Alberto. Link to comment
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