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Excellent color and saturation.

I think a smaller crop taking out more of the bottom part could work. The left bottom corner is a little distracting; and with that cropping the eyes could be located closer to the thirds rule.

But the portrait is really good.

Luis

 

I agree with the comment before me. You definitely want to take out any extra distraction from the bottom. Her eyes are gorgeous and her smile is mysteriously beautiful. Great image.

Beautiful portrait...I really like the lighting on this image...it really shapes your model's lovely face...she has a wonderfully demure smile and striking eyes. My only complaint is that I would like to see it larger so that I could really see all the detail..